Score: 7

"Interesting to see."

submission: Yings Unfinished Business

date: November 3, 2009

I like the Around the Galazy clip the best, the animation ability you have is truly amazing. That's cool how the opening you created for your friend played on television, that's awesome. I didn't really understand the purpose of any of the films until the author comments you left about each appeared. I also thought the author comments sort of disrupted the flow of the pieces, a white screen randomly popping up did decrease the entertainment value.

I thought the main menu screen was set up nicely, and each scene had good music. I'm suprised you decided not to use that Ying-Yong logo you animated, it looked really neat. Overall, I'd say only two, Around the Galaxy and So This is Love, have potential and could do well on this site. It was interesting to see how procrastination won the battle too, haha. Anyway, keep up the good work!

Score: 7

"Pretty good."

submission: Locklegionpixel.swf

date: November 1, 2009

I completely forgot about Ban Day this year, so I'm glad I watched this so it could trigger my memory. The animation looked very nice and I thought the dialogue was used to its fullest. The flash stopping was annoying, and some of the text is unreadable because it is white and I can't see it on the background. It was still an interesting flash to watch, I'm always impressed by what the Lock Legion comes up with.

I thought it was funny how you kept saying that you didn't know how to make transitions, it really added to the humor of the flash. The music was nice too. I saw my name in the author comments and freaked out, I appreciate the recognition, thanks for that. Overall, it was an entertaining movie, I'm looking forward to seeing the finished product. Keep up the good work!

Score: 6

"Decent game."

submission: Charlie the gay frog

date: October 31, 2009

I thought the storyline for the game was funny, you should have put more of that information into the game, like making it an adventure game or something. The animation was pretty good and I liked the music as well. The controls were good, but even when I right-clicked on play nothing happened, so I had to press forward to get the game rolling, maybe you should have a look at it.

The frog's different jumping abilities were a good challenge, but some of them couldn't really jump at all which was frustrating. It took me a while to figure out there was not an objective to the game, I wish I would have read that in the author's comments first. It was a noble idea for a game, but I thought it could have been executed better. Keep up the good work!

Score: 9

"I like it."

submission: -:YRX:- Chaoz AirFlow RMX

date: October 30, 2009

I like how the cheering at the beginning, and the person's voice sounded cool when it the beat kicked off into high gear. I thought the transitions could have sounded better, but I overall thought this sounded really cool. I like when it sounds like snapping and the howling was a cool addition to the song as well. This was a sick tune bro, keep up the great work!

Score: 10

"Really nice."

submission: Hacsev Jazz

date: October 26, 2009

As a saxophone player myself, I have always been a fan of jazz. It's great to hear all of the musical instruments combined together in this one to make a funky rhythm and catchy beat. I like the drum beats and the music at the beginning the best. Nothing to complain about at all for this piece, it was perfectly executed. Keep up the great work!

Score: 9

"It's very catchy."

submission: Mute City [Box-Killa]

date: October 26, 2009

I recognized it immediately from the F-Zero levels from Super Smash Bros. I liked how the sounds and volume builds up and then tones down. I like when the chime sounds take the melody, it sounded beautiful. By the minute and a half mark, I thought everything sounded repetitive, but you made up for that with the cool drum and bass sounding beat a few seconds later. Overall, a really entertaining tune. Keep up the great work!